Devon,
You put a really good summary together for the Beatles’ Revolver Album. You took all the things we learned and put them in a concise couple of paragraphs telling us some of the more important facts.
The only thing I would have liked to have seen differently, primarily in the last paragraph, is some more personal opinions. I feel like you took your opinions and said it as the majority’s opinion. Not that that is bad necessarily, but I think since it was a question directed towards you. I think your opinions could have been stated with “I think,” or “I feel,” and it would have been a little more personal.
I feel like you covered the main topics very well though. Overall, very good job.
Kyle Ballard
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